The animation and other art left much to be desired, but you're obviously improving. The length surprised me a little as did the story and concept. While the voice acting was very lacking for Kafei, the rest was better. The voicing was especially great from the Keaton.
My favourite part of this was definitely the idea of taking Zelda characters that were only minor and making them the leads. The sound editting was pretty awesome too. I suck at that myself.